I'm making a new mod!

[Todd Khool the Cyborg]

The 1st level is called Sunrise City Zone (download here - http://www.sendspace.com/file/mibzlc) Its a conversion of a Beach & a City (except for the 2nd act thats just a city) I don't have any pics yet but I will soon and I am currently working on my 2nd level Grey Grass Zone. If the link goes out then tell me. I'll re upload it.

 

[SRB2 Guy]

Jazz, link to what you must. No deafed rings, bland, too many 1-ups in a easy spot, overuse of enemies.

 

[Jazz]

Read and understand...

For great justice.

 

[Todd Khool the Cyborg]

Jazz I know how to make a level! So this level was... BAD I admit but I promise my second level will be good.

 

[toaster]

Uhuh. That's what every n00b says. Read it, he's helping you so you aren't scolded in 3.14 seconds.

 

[Todd Khool the Cyborg]

Excuse me...?! I am not a n00b.

 

[toaster]

Exuse my manners, I mean, new person. You do not show charecteristics of the average n00b. I apoligise.

 

[sasuketo uzuchihamaki]

Roffle, the guy's been here since like, June.

 

[Sykotic]

How long have you been level making? If you haven't been doing so for at least six months, I highly doubt you can come up with something as big as you claim.

 

[Todd Khool the Cyborg]

I have been making alot of levels lately. I think about 3 months ago.

 

[Sykotic]

Six months. Lot's of time in to each level. Is that what you did?

 

[Todd Khool the Cyborg]

Of course! I know my level isn't that good but I did but alot of effort into it!

 

[Sykotic]

How much time precisely is what I want to know.

 

[BlueZero4]

Sykotic, lay off.

Firstly, levels are made to have fun. If you can't look at the level and say "I had fun playing this," you did something wrong. If you couldn't say "Yes, I had fun," figure out what's wrong and fix it. Period.

 

[MotorRoach]

I think you like use this image...

 

[Todd Khool the Cyborg]

Sykotic, lay off.

Firstly, levels are made to have fun. If you can't look at the level and say "I had fun playing this," you did something wrong. If you couldn't say "Yes, I had fun," figure out what's wrong and fix it. Period.

Yes I did have fun playing it. And I'm not gonna remake it for anyone either. I just hope Grey Grass is much better though but I did have alot of fun playing it. And I have to remake Grey Grass because theres a strange glitch I can't seem to fix. Sorry but Grey Grass is gonna take me a little longer.

 

[zck2020]

I'm suprised I don't get this much 'criticism' on my levels. And I've only been making levels for about a week. O_O'

Anyway, just keep trying. Everyone starts somewhere. You'll fix these if you perservere hard enough.

 

[Todd Khool the Cyborg]

Thanks but I could use a little extra help if anyone wanted to help me.

 

[Kuja]

I would recommend that you widen the passageways a bit, and give the stage a bit of variety. Sunrise City you say? Try making it look more like the name suggests.

I'm curious as to what kind of feel were you aiming for in your level. Maybe if you tell us that, we would be able to help you more.

Because nobody likes to run through a straight, clausterphobic level.

 

[Todd Khool the Cyborg]

I know what you mean. I do need to make the level more big and add some more stuff. My level Sunrise City is a beach city. It has beach areas in some parts and city's in other parts (except for act 2 which is just a city).