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I need criticism on some sprites

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The sprites are good; The only things that bother me are:

His pants. They don't have any shading, and are shaped oddly..

He's too tall. Try making him a bit shorter, or else he'll either crash or be a bit.. Odd.

The side sprite of him bothers me a bit. His head is rather rectangle shaped. Also, try fixing his hair in the front- It shouldn't cover him like that. Also, try to spread his legs out more, so it doesn't look like he has one leg in that sprite.
 
zck2020 said:
Why do his shoulders have boobs?
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Those are muscles. >.>

_Manic_ said:
The sprites are good; The only things that bother me are:

His pants. They don't have any shading, and are shaped oddly..

He's too tall. Try making him a bit shorter, or else he'll either crash or be a bit.. Odd.

The side sprite of him bothers me a bit. His head is rather rectangle shaped. Also, try fixing his hair in the front- It shouldn't cover him like that. Also, try to spread his legs out more, so it doesn't look like he has one leg in that sprite.
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His pants aren't shaded in the anime either.
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How tall should a character be, max?

Hmm... I don't know how I missed the side sprite faults... but thanks for the info.
 
zck2020 said:
Why do his shoulders have boobs?
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wins,jk(lol you made me laugh my head off)


Ok,I dont think you should make him REALLY tall,
also i would suggest you continue on these sprites.Their acctually pretty good.I really dont have any crit....*leaves*
 
On the side sprites, move his 'shoulder muscles' up a bit so that they're the same height as they are on the other sprites.
 
_Manic_ said:
As well as his arms.. Try making his legs about.. 4 or 6 pixels taller than Sonic.
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I think that this character's proportions are intended. The only thing that bothers me about these sprites are some of the symatry errors.
 
_Manic_ said:
As well as his arms.. Try making his legs about.. 4 or 6 pixels taller than Sonic.
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... Maybe the arms are a bit to long. >.>

on Edge said:
Is your character is completely symmetrical, you don't need 8 angles, only 5.
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The buttons are on only one side... It's not symmetrical.
 
Crazygamerx6 said:
_Manic_ said:
As well as his arms.. Try making his legs about.. 4 or 6 pixels taller than Sonic.
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... Maybe the arms are a bit to long. >.>

on Edge said:
Is your character is completely symmetrical, you don't need 8 angles, only 5.
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The buttons are on only one side... It's not symmetrical.
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You don't have to use the 8 frames for such a small detail, The onlt real reason to use it if they had hair thats different on both sides or like different colored eyes.
 
"Small" detail? The only details I call small are the ones less than a pixel...
I like to make it as best as possible, y'know?
 
Crazygamerx6 said:
"Small" detail? The only details I call small are the ones less than a pixel...
I like to make it as best as possible, y'know?
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I understand, but if you over-do it then people won't like it.
 
How? Better quality and attention detail means cooler, better wads/sprites. Though I do still agree that the buttons are a minor detail.
 
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