A-star the hedgehog WIP (not a recolor)

[Chimera]

Also, make sure there is no neck. Sonic characters have no neck |=\

Yes they do, only it's not shown much. EVERYTHING living that stands on two legs has a neck. Hedgehogs don't stand on their hind legs in real life, but they have necks anyway. :P

Basically, just don't really make it that his neck stands out too much.

 

[Tails24]

Also, make sure there is no neck. Sonic characters have no neck |=\

Yes they do, only it's not shown much. EVERYTHING living that stands on two legs has a neck. Hedgehogs don't stand on their hind legs in real life, but they have necks anyway. :P

Basically, just don't really make it that his neck stands out too much.

Basically what I ment... Whatever =P

 

[zck2020]

It doesn't fit in with the head. Really, it barely looks like a body. It looks like a thin egg painted blue with stubs glued onto it.

Body...
Needs work.

Um, I wouldn't call this your final, the body still needs alot of work...

I told you so.

 

[A-star]

um... sonic males don't wear clothes, now do they?

I guess I'll take a look at senku's WADs.

 

[zck2020]

Be original for once. Think of your own design instead of copycatting Senku's stuff. And yes, male Sonic characters can wear cloths. Example: boots, belts, socks, gloves, and etc.

 

[kiro the hedgehog]

V9

V10 -final

his head on the back sprite has bad shading =/
it shouldnt be straight, but a curve whith the shape of his head

 

[A-star]

I don't not understand what your saying. And I ran out of shades...

 

[Monster Iestyn]

How could you run out of shades, astar? Besides, is that in the SRB2 Pallete?

For some reason, those head spikes look flat even though they have shading. There's not enough to them to make them look solid rather than flat.

That diagonal front head look more like a front view head than what it's meant to be. Move the nose more to the side, hide the ear to the right behind the ear. Just make that head look like it's been turned to the right a bit more.

And as everyone else said, that body looks awful. Make it look more like a body. Those shoes aren't good either. Look at how Sonic's body and shoes were drawn, from all angles, and improve on your's so they look good too.

 

[Tails24]

Mind if I edit it to show you a better body?

 

[kiro the hedgehog]

I don't not understand what your saying. And I ran out of shades...

this is what i mean:

look at the head of the back sprite, that's how i would do the shading, i personaly think its better.
And the body...yea...you need to work on that body
but the other head sprites are good

 

[Tails24]

Also its not in the srb2 palette. I made a new body for him, but will only show it if Astar says its all right

 

[zck2020]

Move his head down, overlapping the body a little bit. Otherwise his looks a little impaired.

 

[A-star]

@Tails24

okay, you can.

@zck2020

I was going to look at to see how to make it more realistic.

 

[zck2020]

??? Lemme refrase that, he looks retarded with his head sitting at the very top of his body like that. Move the head down a bit.

 

[Chromatian]

We can't be recolours of each other, because our shape is different with every human.

Twins? They can be reclours.

Let me try to understand something, if he were to make his character fat, taller than Sonic, with a neck and the likes, it wouldn't be a reclour or edit?

 

[Daredevil]

The A2A8 sprites are kinda dodgy, and he's too wide.

 

[zck2020]

Let me try to understand something, if he were to make his character fat, taller than Sonic, with a neck and the likes, it wouldn't be a reclour or edit?

No, he'd just look fat and tall. (And long necked.)

 

[Chromatian]

But then that makes humans.....

I might as well give up, I'm already off topic.

 

[Tails24]

Sorry A-star that I didn't get this in quicker =\

Also, I colored it in the srb2 palette ;)

 

[Monster Iestyn]

That body looks small compared to the head, Tails24... o_O