Primeiro mapa criado por mim

[Marcelo_Souza555]

Hello everyone!.
This map was made by me.
As I said in the forum, I'll still get by on the map because I could not alter the title of the map!

If you do not understand this language is that it is being translated by google translator and I am Brazilian do not speak very good English.

Continuing.

These are some pictures of my first map.

He is extremely small, however for beginners I think it looks good!.

Download:

Link: http://www.mediafire.com/?mk7pll3a1gzh0sx
Scan: http://www.virustotal.com/file-scan...3a98de712239cbf702cf1e688eb3f2171-1284172925#

Bye Bye :)

 

[Chaotic Chao]

Try putting some more decoration things, and mix up the textures you use a little bit.

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You can understand this, right...?

 

[Virt]

Also, if Google Translator is translating this right, you should make the wall texture less repetitive, also.

 

[Router]

This is cool

 

[Kim the Fox!!!]

Hey, man, I'm brazilian too, and maybe I can help ya. Just contact me and I can give a push.
Tips for the map:
1) Use middle textures for the plaforms. I saw these platforms without grass borders and thought that something was missing.
2) I agree with Chaotic Chao. Vary up these textures. Using the same textures won't give life to the stage.
3) Two screenshots were without any enemies or decoration items. Try to make the stage a little prettier.
This is all. I think you should read the Level Designer 101 Tutorial. This would improve your skills. However, it is in English, and I'm writing an translated version of it. If you need, just PM me.