Cosmic Angel Zone Level Pack

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OK!!
This is my first level pack and now its being released!

there are 9 levels in all

now for the download link:
MIRROR: http://www.datafilehost.com/download.php?file=ed216a41





and for screenshots...:


Cosmic Angel Zone Start
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Cosmic Angel Zone
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Volcanic Rift Zone
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Volcanic Eruption! Run! Zone
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Cosmic Rift Zone
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Cosmic Space Rift Zone
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Doomsday
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Fixes: when game crashes message says: THANK YOU FOR PLAY COSMIC ANGEL ZONE =D ILL MAKE MORE LEVELS!!! HOPED YOU ENJOYED THIS!!
Doomsday zone: super sonic sector hidden

HOPE YOU ENJOY IT!!!
 
By looking at the designs, there are a few things about this.

- Very Cramped in some areas
- lack of creativity in some stages. Doomsday zone and the first stage are 2 examples. Since doomsday does not have water, and the first stage is just water, and all stages/ or most stages are boss levels = bad
- rings don't have deaf tags on.
- MAP03 had some ONLY decent design, but why nights type of level? D:

I rate this a 2/10. Really, this needs extreme improvement, if you want it to be a decent mod.
 
1:all zones are hard
2:map03 i didnt think the springs would work so NIGHTS mode was enabled
3:water idea from mystic realm to make people try harder.
4: my creativity limits are good. (if i change it xwe says I/O error cuz i tried.
5 boss stage issue: i like bosses
6:csrz has
water because you are in eggmans teleporting area.
7 doomsday isse: common i like this level =( and if i fix it, it crashes

i put a lot of effort into this (1 whole day)
took 1 day cause of errors.

common people... I dont tell you how to make your mods =(. ive seen a mod with only bosses
 
You should realize that SRB2TBE isn't fully completed yet, and only shows the completed levels, not every single level. That's why the other levels are missing.
 
SuperSonic64 said:
common people... I dont tell you how to make your mods.

We are not telling you how to make your mod. It's called constructive critisism. If you don't like it, then don't release it at all. You are not going to expect every comment to be great. Sheesh I've had comments on my first maps that we're just like it. I don't get them very often because I learn from my mistakes most of the time.

I take a long time releasing my projects/maps vice versa because I take my time, and learn everything.If you've read the wiki, and the tutorial, you may find some stuff to use to make, and update your levels. I'm giving you advice here.
 
SuperSonic64 said:
1:all zones are hard
2:map03 i didnt think the springs would work so NIGHTS mode was enabled
3:water idea from mystic realm to make people try harder.
4: my creativity limits are good. (if i change it xwe says I/O error cuz i tried.
5 boss stage issue: i like bosses
6:csrz has
water because you are in eggmans teleporting area.
7 doomsday isse: common i like this level =( and if i fix it, it crashes

i put a lot of effort into this (1 whole day)
took 1 day cause of errors.

So... Your seven badly spelled and formatted excuses explain exactly why your level pack sucks. But maybe you need some extra explanation. First of all, you should have spent at least 2-3 days per map. Obviously all nine of your maps suck, because you obviously spent so little time on them.

I would like you to note that nobody likes levels like these. So, here are my suggestions.

1. Go read the wiki, Level Design 101 should be a good place for you to start.

2. Spend more than one day on your work. This should be a no brainer.

SuperSonic64 said:
common people... I dont tell you how to make your mods =(. ive seen a mod with only bosses

Almost everyone who has commented on your maps thus far have all made and/or released maps of their own. And mind you, I'm quite sure all of us could do a better job than this, so if I were you, I'd take our advice...
 
Jazz said:
SuperSonic64 said:
1:all zones are hard
2:map03 i didnt think the springs would work so NIGHTS mode was enabled
3:water idea from mystic realm to make people try harder.
4: my creativity limits are good. (if i change it xwe says I/O error cuz i tried.
5 boss stage issue: i like bosses
6:csrz has
water because you are in eggmans teleporting area.
7 doomsday isse: common i like this level =( and if i fix it, it crashes

i put a lot of effort into this (1 whole day)
took 1 day cause of errors.

So... Your seven badly spelled and formatted excuses explain exactly why your level pack sucks. But maybe you need some extra explanation. First of all, you should have spent at least 2-3 days per map. Obviously all nine of your maps suck, because you obviously spent so little time on them.

I would like you to note that nobody likes levels like these. So, here are my suggestions.

1. Go read the wiki, Level Design 101 should be a good place for you to start.

2. Spend more than one day on your work. This should be a no brainer.

SuperSonic64 said:
common people... I dont tell you how to make your mods =(. ive seen a mod with only bosses

Almost everyone who has commented on your maps thus far have all made and/or released maps of their own. And mind you, I'm quite sure all of us could do a better job than this, so if I were you, I'd take our advice...

lol i spent a week =3. but doomsday took a whole day to do over because i messed the old one up =S but im going to do another thing i guess. =/ oh well...
 
k, lets see here

1st stage: The water idea was not taken from Mystic realm. Mystic Realm had bubbles.
2nd stage: It wasn't very smart of you to make NiGHTS mode enabled. This made Sonic jump to high, making the stage Useless because if you fall, it's won't take long to get back up. And why make useless springs on the sides?
3rd stage: The same as the 2nd only without Eggman, springs, and the finish was in the center. Useless
4rd stage: Impossable to do as Sonic. I ran around the whole thing and didn't see anything.
5th stage: The same as the previous except Eggman and some red springs and lava in the center. The ledges are to thin making it hard just to run, but once Eggman hits a wall, he's dead.
6th stage: Unplayable due to the fact that as soon as I run forward, I automaticly die.
 
I'm sorry, you need to stop mass producing things. Try making one decent level, then come back and talk to us.
 
SuperSonic64 said:
if you dont like my mod dont play it

If you are going to have that kind of attitude, I suggest you never release anything here again...

You will never get any better unless you accept criticism.
 
One big thing! Your doing repeative lvls. The level where you cant get past as sonic. The next level is the same thing but you fixed it and has a boss?
 
it's ok but some of these levels are really bad sorry for the criticism even though i'm your friend but i have to agree some of these levels were bad but i give it a 4/15 just cause the fact that some of them are ok too play
 
BlueZero4 said:
I'm sorry, you need to stop mass producing things. Try making one decent level, then come back and talk to us.
Attention SRB2 Messageboard. We have our new Roboegg99!

SuperSonic64, please accept the Recky Award for "diminishing reputation through trying too hard".

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SuperSonic64 said:
can someone lock this topic? im getting tired of complaints. if you dont like my mod dont play it

Failure. Insta-lock. If you can't take Constructive Criticism, don't post this crap on the forum. You can remake this topic after two weeks. If no progress has been done when you remake it, I will lock that one too.

You have been warned.

Sonict
 
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