Honestly this feels weird to me as i have never been a mentor of some sorts, only just a random guy giving some advices, if so, as i always been a student myself since always, and i gotta say, im far from being a professional, like, VERY far, but i can safely say that unlike my first maps, which can be found as last maps on my coop, (probably soon to be removed from it, with adjusted versions of them), i did improved a lot in these 3 years.
And i can hope for the best that you do too, as, im gonna be honest, this for being your first map, in general, you did an impressive job, and im kind of sad, because when i did, my first maps were just so mediocre, on a thin line to being straight up sh*t. No wonder D00d rejected my very first map, thought i dont really feel proud of it, i do feel it like my first child.
I hope you get better throught out the time, youre a fast learner! unlike me sadly. I just only wanna see how do you do it by your own, without me helping you, or directly putting my hands onto the map you're making, try doing your next map by yourself! i bet you can do it even better but without my help.
