[Open Assets] Bridge Valley Zone Act 1

Guys! After a long time of training and learning all the delights of Zone Builder, I want to present my first map - Bridge Valley.

The concept of this level is a summer zone with a lot of bridges. In my imagination, I imagined something like a speed glade, but I realized it only half. I built this level together with other ideas at the beginning of this year, but I started working on it in August.

I want to say that despite the apparent simplicity of the map, I tried. After all, this is only one map in my big project. As I said, I still have a lot of work in mind that can be implemented. Some of them, by the way, have just started.

Thank you to the native community for testing the map and helping to find bugs that were present in the raw version of the level.







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Welcome to releases!

Okay, let's get started!

Let's all confess: Nobody likes water that kills.



Why is there grass somewhere, but not somewhere?





The waterfalls look strange. You could use some more sounds of water.



It just looks ugly. You can add fog for the "Bottomless Pit" effect.



Small mistake.



I would put the spring straight.



Well what can I say... For the first level, this is a good enough product. I want to point out that your decoration is pretty good.
I didn't like the walls surrounding the level. They look in places... not very good.

You yourself ran into your trap. This section is really big, but it looks empty.



There is no "Bottomless Pit" effect (fog) in the caves, which is a little disappointing. It doesn't look very pretty.

Main claims:
- Water is killing you.
- Walls.
- Little play with shadows. There is no shadow under the bridges.

I participated in beta testing and I hope that in the future you will publish your work. I will definitely watch. Good luck!

Version 1.1 is now available. Here I have corrected everything that you noticed earlier. Waiting for new answers.

a very good map for speedrun

Kwiin said:

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hehe hyperwall bad that's getting fixxed next update