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Ray.wad is back!

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H Y P E R

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Some of you may remember my old Ray wad
from a few months ago. I've decided to Re-make it.
Here are the standing sprites:
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I've gotten a lot better at spriting during my break
haven't I? =P
 
H Y P E R said:
It's blue so that it can change colors properly.
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..Green, not blue.

Anyway, I'd wait 'till ME unless you're using me's palette for this. The sprites themselves look pretty good and I can't spot any faults in them.
 
You're going to need blue arms, again. If he doesn't, he isn't a Flying Squirrel.
 
@Jellyowns
Yeah, I guess I should wait till ME... When is
that going to be released, again?

@Viola
They're staying tan, please stop going on about it.
 
H Y P E R said:
@Jellyowns
Yeah, I guess I should wait till ME... When is
that going to be released, again?
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July 25th. You can be ahead and just make the sprites for the ME pallete.
 
H Y P E R said:
@Viola
They're staying tan, please stop going on about it.
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Firstly, Viola? Are you trying to insult me? It's Violo.

Scondly, Next-gen or not, they have to stay covered in fur unless you can explain why he can't fly anymore.

Thirdly, it seems like you can't take any criticism, it's really easy to change the colour of some arms.
 
Violo said:
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Scondly, Next-gen or not, they have to stay covered in fur unless you can explain why he can't fly anymore.
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Someone explain this to me. We've got platforms and rings and just about everything else that floats with little to no explanation, so why can't a squirrel fly just because there's no fur on the arms?

That aside, looking good so far, Hyper. The peach seems a bit dark, but that might just be the blue contrasting poorly.
 
Tails is fail on the side and front corner frames, too stiff
Eyes are fail on all the frames that have them
Colors are too bright, will look bad ingame.
Make the mouth be the darkest shade the muzzle has instead of that black color

Other than those complaints, excellent.
 
Chrispy said:
1. Tails is fail on the side and front corner frames, too stiff
2. Eyes are fail on all the frames that have them
3.Colors are too bright, will look bad ingame.
4.Make the mouth be the darkest shade the muzzle has instead of that black color

Other than those complaints, excellent.
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1. Very true, but whenever I try to fix them it just
ends up looking worse.
2. Yeah, that's true. I think they look ok on the front frames,
but I'm kinda thinking of re-doing them on the other ones.
3. In some colors, that would be true, however I tried
it in gold and it looks fine.
4. I might consider that. I'll try it now and see how it looks.
 
Well make it darker anyways. Also I feel the gloves and shoes you did don't fit Ray at all, I don't like the red and white colors. Maybe try something more brownish or green. Also the side frames mouth is too far back. To fix the tail, on the corner and side frames make it come out more to right right rather than straight up. The only reason straight up looks good on the back frame is because it still has the illusion that its coming out some.
I don't like the way the eyes look on any of the frames
 
The point where they connect is too high and too pointy, and the shape of the rest of them doesn't look right.
 
I know I may sound a bit nooby saying this, but
can someone please re-do the eyes on
the front/diagonal and side standing sprites?
They just look terrible, especially the side one.
C'mon guys, I need your help.
 
Definitely better than the other Ray WADs I've seen! Good work!

...By the way, it can still be yellow and change color. You just need to set your startcolor and endcolor to the right values.
 
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