Citrus Circuit

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http://srb2ffh.supersanctuary.net/439r_Citruscircuit.wad


Screenshots
http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h118/Chao_Master/srb20002.png
The entrance to the temple

http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h118/Chao_Master/srb20003.png
Water section

http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h118/Chao_Master/srb20004.png
This shrine is at the end of the temple. It teleports you back to the start.


This level takes place mostly inside the temple, and a little bit of it outside the temple. It's map 70, replacing quick sand ruins zone.

EDIT:
Thanks to everyone who beta tested, you all helped me very much.
 
Alright! The level made it! Nice one.
Well, you already know what I think of it, so I don't think I need to say more...
 
light the elementa said:
I tested it too! How come I didn't get credit?
Click to expand...
Oh, yeah. Forgot you tested the earlier versions... well, edited post with credit.
Not many posts here... :/
 
I didn't enjoy this one at all. Too dark and flat; and it has that obnoxious blind corner with the death pit. The crushers were a terrible idea, and the map didn't feel like a Citrus Circuit at all. At least you tried, though.
 
10/10! *assimilated* I give it a 5/10 it's okay, but a little too cramped and what's with the one secret behind the waterfall? Is it like a shortcut or is it for the lulz?
 
I downloaded this.

And it was awesome.

But it had a few flaws. Okay, first of all, don't make it too dark. :( Sight is of utmost importance in SRB2. I also felt that it was a little bit flat. Multiple and frequent sector floor height changes will fix this. One more thing, don't put huge, inconspicuous death pits in a race level. In fact, I don't think race levels should have death pits, Period. Try replacing them with damaging water blocks.

I give it an 8/10. :) You did very well, and I liked the scenery, especially the shattered bridge pieces! GENIUS. The torches were a bit oddly-placed, though.
 
Wow. Thanks for actually commenting. I really like the feedback, because when the next version of SRB2 comes out I'm thinking of fixing everything people said weren't good in my levels and putting them into a small level pack or something. Thanks!


Also, there was only one deathpit, and it was the in the temple. The water actually is damaging water block. I think a lot of people just go right into it without rings.. I'm thinking of just making it normal water though. No real reason for it to hurt you.
 
Sorry for the double post but I have made an update to the level.


The water no longer damages you, and the temple is brighter now too. The secret area I accidentally made is now slightly easier to spot (and to get to, now that water is safe.Also if you HAVE been there before, it's been changed.)


The new download link is in the first post.
 
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