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Old 10-20-2007   #1
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Default My very fist leval ship at sea

this leval is basicaly just a ship at sea

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Old 10-20-2007   #2
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From the screenshot you posted, it looks like a good try for a 1st map. But... I don't see anything redeeming in here. Nothing special. I can't point exactily to the problem, but nice try.

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Old 10-20-2007   #3
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this leval is basicaly just a ship at sea

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[img]http://www.freewebs.com/sonicroboblast2addons/srb20002.png

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Why did you copy my picture? So you can be like me to ban?
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Old 10-20-2007   #4
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If by picture, you mean avatar, you didn't make yours yourself...

Anyway, the map looks too bland, try adding some kind of structure in the middle, like a pirate flag, have a red spring to the top, and infinite ring be there. BTW, I actually haven't tried the map yet, I'm judging by the screenie.

EDIT: Boy, was I wrong. This map owns for a first one. Better Item placement, deafed rings, and you're good to go.
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Old 10-20-2007   #5
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This level is a ship at sea.



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I fixed it. On another note, terribly bland.
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Old 10-20-2007   #6
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Some other things:

1. Too many random monitors in one place. There should almost never be more than one in the same general location on the map.
2. Multiple weapon rings in the same general location. You should separate weapon rings by some distance, so it makes things difficult for players to control that ring weapon.
3. Level is too dark. I'm not sure why you set the lighting level so low.

It seems that you have the basics down either way. Far ahead of quite a few other first maps I've seen.
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Old 10-20-2007   #7
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Judging from the screenshots it is... okay if a little empty. I can't really try it now, but I will ASAP. But please try to improve your spelling.
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Old 10-20-2007   #8
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That looks mysteriously similar to the old Ships of War wad...
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