Hi there, I'm back, and I'm writing a book called Stargate: Andromeda. I need some feedback on it. It's quite long, around 13 chapters. It obviously isn't finished yet, that's why I need some feedback. My dad says I should change the first part where SG-1 is woken up from a stasis they were forced into, but I think otherwise. Anyway, I won't reveal too much of the book, that would make it not fun to read.
Here's the link: http://www.mediafire.com/?vrruw5o3oyrydqx
Hope you enjoy it!
P.S. Yes I know this is technically something I could get in trouble for, as in plaigarism, but I'm trying to get it approved by MGM. I just don't know how to contact them. And yes, there are other Stargate Books out there: www.stargatenovels.com
Here's the link: http://www.mediafire.com/?vrruw5o3oyrydqx
Hope you enjoy it!
P.S. Yes I know this is technically something I could get in trouble for, as in plaigarism, but I'm trying to get it approved by MGM. I just don't know how to contact them. And yes, there are other Stargate Books out there: www.stargatenovels.com