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[SRB2 Riders] Spring Garden
Version: 0.5, by SRB2PlayerFan (2.1 Kart is coming soon!) SRB2PlayerFan is offline
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Released: 09-12-2011 Last Update: Never Installs: 1
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Drive around this simple park! Don't enjoy the scenery too much.

(This is going to be one of the tracks in my future kart level pack.)

NOTE: This map uses MAPR0.
NOTE 2: More scenery will be coming soon, so hold on to your seats.

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If one area is cramped, I'll fix it.

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Old 09-15-2011   #2
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Released. Bumpity-bump.
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Old 09-15-2011   #3
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Well, this was pretty generic. Your level here is basically a big circle, barring that bump which there is no reason to take since you can just drift through the grass. The track itself is rather uninteresting and there is virtually nothing special about it what so ever other than it's too wide for my tastes. Scenery is sparse at best and consists of lots of flower things clumped together in groups strewn about randomly in the level. And everywhere else, there is an extreme lack of decoration, just long, flat planes of grass. There's also these structures with incredibly misaligned textures which don't look nice at all.

You need to focus more on making a fun and engaging track that has plenty of unique set pieces to make it stand out. There is some vertical variation, but not enough to stick out. The track is long, might as well be flat, and has nothing of value.
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Old 09-16-2011   #4
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Well, this was pretty generic. Your level here is basically a big circle, barring that bump which there is no reason to take since you can just drift through the grass. The track itself is rather uninteresting and there is virtually nothing special about it what so ever other than it's too wide for my tastes. Scenery is sparse at best and consists of lots of flower things clumped together in groups strewn about randomly in the level. And everywhere else, there is an extreme lack of decoration, just long, flat planes of grass. There's also these structures with incredibly misaligned textures which don't look nice at all.

You need to focus more on making a fun and engaging track that has plenty of unique set pieces to make it stand out. There is some vertical variation, but not enough to stick out. The track is long, might as well be flat, and has nothing of value.
Yeah, I know. I'll fix it in the next release. As of now, I'll leave this level alone until I can come up with something.
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Old 09-16-2011   #5
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If this is your first map, it's a nice first effort.

However, using a green hill texture for a high block, it repeat and repeat to the floor, which isn't good, try making a solid fof above it and make what you need.

The textures didn't fit THAT much. and the map bugs because the level is too big. (Rendering fail. you should make it a little smaller)
Don't put crowd where the players can reach. because they aren't solid, so its not a good idea. try putting them in a high block.

You're good at making maps. textures don't fit too much, there is a big flat grass here, you may improve this, just putting like more scenery.

I give you 7/10 for the gameplay, 4/10 for the textures and 8/10 for the scenery. there isn't that much to say.

Edit: Forgot to say why I give you 7/10, the map is too small. making on some obstacles should make it better.
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Old 09-16-2011   #6
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If this is your first map, it's a nice first effort.

However, using a green hill texture for a high block, it repeat and repeat to the floor, which isn't good, try making a solid fof above it and make what you need.

The textures didn't fit THAT much. and the map bugs because the level is too big. (Rendering fail. you should make it a little smaller)
Don't put crowd where the players can reach. because they aren't solid, so its not a good idea. try putting them in a high block.

You're good at making maps. textures don't fit too much, there is a big flat grass here, you may improve this, just putting like more scenery.

I give you 7/10 for the gameplay, 4/10 for the textures and 8/10 for the scenery. there isn't that much to say.

Edit: Forgot to say why I give you 7/10, the map is too small. making on some obstacles should make it better.
Thanks for the review, I'll be sure to use the GFZROCK texture next release.

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I can resize the map to make it bigger and longer.
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Old 09-17-2011   #7
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I've played this level and this level didn't Interest me. The dirt area is small and the grass area is huge! The level has to many graphical glitches. shrink the size of the grass area, that area is too flat too. Add some little hills or something.
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Old 09-17-2011   #8
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I've played this level and this level didn't Interest me. The dirt area is small and the grass area is huge! The level has to many graphical glitches. shrink the size of the grass area, that area is too flat too. Add some little hills or something.
I'm thinking of adding more scenery, and as I said, I'm leaving the level alone until I come up with something.
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