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Old 04-17-2018   #3501
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Here is the second cartoon short I have ever completed, released just recently:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zhNFOvN6YSw

It's not really funny or anything, it's more of an experiment for me to work on my animation and direction skills.

It is done in the style of the classic cartoons of the 1940s, completely animated on paper on one of those big animation disks. The backgrounds are also painted, with minor edits done digitally. Any constructive criticism/ suggestions are welcomed, and would greatly help me!
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Old 4 Weeks Ago   #3503
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Here is the second cartoon short I have ever completed, released just recently:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zhNFOvN6YSw

It's not really funny or anything, it's more of an experiment for me to work on my animation and direction skills.

It is done in the style of the classic cartoons of the 1940s, completely animated on paper on one of those big animation disks. The backgrounds are also painted, with minor edits done digitally. Any constructive criticism/ suggestions are welcomed, and would greatly help me!
It's clear that a lot of time and effort went into this, you have the drawing style and musical scoring more or less down pat, and I really liked some of the reactions and expressions you drew, some of them really did feel like something out of an old Tex Avery, and Tom and Jerry cartoon of the period.

However, your pacing could use some work and in some parts the animation seemed rather stiff and wonky.

Incidentally, this is just a minor, and extremely petty nitpick that didn't detract from my enjoyment in any major way but, the sound effects you used seemed more appropriate for a tv cartoon made in the 60s or 70s.

I may edit this post in the future to elaborate in further detail, partially because classic animation is a subject I am very passionate about, and partially because at the time I am posting this it is 3:00 in the morning and I'm not all here.
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Old 3 Weeks Ago   #3506
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I finally got a real camera! Here's a few pictures I took at a nearby park.
























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i tried out something ''cuter'' and it went out like this (yes she's best girl)
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I'm actually amazed at those photos Ultimate. are you a professional photographer or something?
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I'm actually amazed at those photos Ultimate. are you a professional photographer or something?
Thank you, Shiron! And, nope, not a pro...although it would be neat if my photos are good enough to sell. My main hobby is music. I've always loved photography, and took pictures all the time with my phone, but I didn't have a real camera until a few days ago...I've gone a little crazy and have been taking tons of photos. Here's some more from the other day...I went to an old forest in Japan, called Ishiharagatake. It was used by the military as a training grounds, but has since been turned into a forest park. It has a really beautiful and mysterious atmosphere. I hope you guys like the pictures!

This is one of the first things you see as you enter the park. If you go up the stairs, there are a few paths that lead to the bunkers.

Rough and colored texture on a tree in Ishiharagatake Park, in Saikai, Japan. The trees have a really neat texture for this area. They're very different than any of the trees just a few minutes away.

A giant snail shell that I saw clinging to a tree. It was about the size of the palm of my hand!

A gazebo, as seen from below. So many different kinds of trees and plantlife! It's so beautiful here!

I think this is one of the bunker areas, but I'm not sure that you can enter this one. There are quite a few in a different area that you can go inside...but I'm not sure that I would want to...

A random stump at the entrance to the park. It's there to prevent people from driving through.

The entrance from a slightly different angle.

A wasp I saw chewing on an old wooden plank.

The gazebo from the earlier picture.

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Those are really great shots, Ultimate! Damn, you make me want to visit Japan even more, now.
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Those are really great shots, Ultimate! Damn, you make me want to visit Japan even more, now.
You absolutely should! It's even more incredible than I imagined...and if possible I highly recommend going to both the city and the countryside. If you ever plan a trip here and need help getting around or anything, let me know! Also, Boinciel might be able to help you out as well!
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tried my hand at spriting
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