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Old 02-10-2015   #2901
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I have to be honest here. Those eyes are horrifyingly ugly, and one eye is higher than the other. Also, why are the blush marks sticking out of the face as if the blushing was something solid? And that mouth... it's just way too low, you might want to move it up. You may also want to move the nose a bit more forward, because keeping it exactly in the middle of the face from this angle is only implying that your Sylveon's face is completely flat.
I almost knew you will reply to my professional art X)
Anyway I took in consideration what you've say and I came with this:


The only things I think are still not good enough are maybe the eyes, but I could fix that later. Removed the shading, I suck at it, I've just put some in the eyes because it looked really weird without it. I might give a try to some shading later (This is gonna end up like shit X))

Cannot be worse than the old one anyway.

Also note that I used paint, I mean the regular one with Windows for the first one, kinda hard to end up with something good. I used Paint.net this time
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Old 02-10-2015   #2902
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The eyes are too close together. As a protip, the space between two eyes is usually eye-length, for animals it's sometimes a bit longer. Look up some tutorials and references so you can get an idea.
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Old 02-10-2015   #2903
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I think this time I went farther than I even wanted to...


Still have to get some shading up because it looks really bland right now.
Also I took your advice and spaced the eyes some more, and I scaled them down by the way.
Anyway, waiting for you guys opinion about what I should improve :P
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Old 02-10-2015   #2904
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The head doesn't look aligned with the rest of the body. Shift it right a ways.
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Old 02-10-2015   #2905
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I'd suggest against using Paint or Paint.NET for your drawings, since you're clearly doing line based work. Paint.NET allows VERY limited control over curves and Paint's line/curve is just AAAAAAAAAA

Gimp, Sai or Photoshop might be more useful.
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Old 02-10-2015   #2906
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When it comes to do drawings like "Lat" does, Adobe Illustrator is a very usefull tool.
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Old 02-10-2015   #2907
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Valley fo the Dark Lords on Korriban as planned for my final project for this year's art class. Sorry, crappy camera. :V
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Old 02-10-2015   #2908
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Well I'm actually using Paint.net since I was lazy to make Gimp work (as it always crashes a second after I launch it) and to download any other drawing tool in general. That's not like I was going to become a decent drawer/spriter anyway.

Anyway I'm gonna shift dat head when I'll go to my comp tomorrow and then I'm gonna play TF2 for the rest of the day.
Beside that head, everything else is "okay"? Just curious.

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@Steelie: I'm not the only one to have a crappy "camera", phew saved.
Anyway this looks pretty good, I can't really tell more because of the camera, or maybe because there's nothing else to say.
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Old 02-10-2015   #2909
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Mozembique Spitting Cobra on the attack. I was only about a few meters away watching this stunning creature in Africa.
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Old 02-11-2015   #2910
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I think this time I went farther than I even wanted to...


Still have to get some shading up because it looks really bland right now.
Also I took your advice and spaced the eyes some more, and I scaled them down by the way.
Anyway, waiting for you guys opinion about what I should improve :P
The head looks like its about to fall off, and the hind legs are fat.
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Old 02-11-2015   #2911
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Old 02-11-2015   #2912
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The head looks like its about to fall off, and the hind legs are fat.
Yeah I'm aware of the head and I'll be fixing that later.
Concerning the hind legs well they don't look fattier than the front ones so I don't know, according to the image I took as reference I did it pretty well ( http://tails19950.deviantart.com/art...-v-4-394254856 Yeah ikr mine doesn't exactly look like the one there, just took it for the pose)


Anyway I also saw a creepy Cobra, let's say you weren't scaring it if it didn't attack you at this range :P
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Old 02-11-2015   #2913
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Mozembique Spitting Cobra on the attack. I was only about a few meters away watching this stunning creature in Africa.
That's pretty awesome. Nice capture.
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Old 02-11-2015   #2914
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Here. Added a thing I forgot to draw and fixed the perspective, without forgetting the head, it will avoid some surgery in the future. I think I'm done with this.
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Old 02-11-2015   #2915
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I drew this a long time ago. She's kinda creepy and should probably have a nose. oh well

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Jasper, your style is too adorable. I couldn't help myself
..that, and I was bored at school

outfit is bad yes, I couldn't understand what you were going for ;-;
I also couldn't completely finish it, as I was completely unaware that I was using my last piece of lead
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Old 02-12-2015   #2916
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Old 02-12-2015   #2917
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Yeah, I know, big head. But I have a rule about using erasers. And that's to not use them at all.
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Old 02-12-2015   #2918
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..that, and I was bored at school
ho my god please get bored more often

I love all the little extra details you put into the design that I just kinda looked over, with the hair flowing more like hair should and the small rips in her sleeves. Honestly I'm getting a little jealous and I also kinda want to try drawing her again to see if I could do a bit better-- but definitely try finishing it if you can! I'm already amazed, but I'd kill to see this finished ;w;

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outfit is bad yes, I couldn't understand what you were going for ;-;
It's kinda like a tattered dress, with a longer shirt worn underneath it. The lines on the waist were kinda made randomly, as I was also at school when I drew this and didn't really have any references on me. I don't know why there's a heart there, but it does make her significantly more creepy (or cute, whichever way you prefer).
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Old 02-13-2015   #2919
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I drew the guy from this comic. (or at least his head)
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Old 02-15-2015   #2920
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Minor boss, rough design sheet.

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