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Kirby - SRB2ME Edition

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Scizor300

a man denied his homeland
Well, seeing as none of the other Kirby WADs are being converted to SRB2ME, I decided to make my own Kirby WAD for SRB2ME.

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Critisism is welcome, but don't be an ass.
 
Ok, I have a little bit of criticism here.
1. The shape of the eyes is wrong, they are
meant to be a bit taller and skinnier
2. The shading is a bit 2d, make it look more 3d
3. There is meant to be a white shine on the eyes
4. It is too big
Other than these, it's good.
 
It's size is probably larger than it should be, but other than that, It's just little to sharp on some parts, but other than that, it's....pretty good. keep workin' on it!
 
Why does he have huge, bug eyes? And I think the shoes need a bit more shading, but it's good otherwise.
 
Shading is really minuscule, shade more than those little areas and make it more noticeable.
 
For the eyes, use the darkest shades of gray you got. Darken the outline of the shoes a bit as well.
 
Shoe tips need to be a bit more curved, and as the others have said, those small areas where shading is required need attention
 
The eyes need to be a slightly farther apart from each other, they're too close if you compare them to an official picture.

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Chrispy said:
lol pillow shading

Doesn't seem that much like pillow shading, actually. :P

Seems PRETTY good, but I suggest making his smile a little smaller, put blue under his eye shine (like in the official pic- he has blue eyes), and I think it'd be better if he had dark pink feet instead of red.
 
Don't make him smile in every sprite, he isn't like that. Just a tip.

Also, his ability? Make it double jump, but make it multiability. You could probably make him jump as high as knuckles to even it out or something.
 
I don't mean to be rude or anything. But if you want you may use these as a reference or you may even use these.

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I don't ask for anything but for my name to be mentioned on the release post, but I don't care if you decide not to. I just hope your wad is succesful. Happy wadding.
 
1) The face appears off-center, and I can only assume this is the front frame.

2) Shading is way way way too minimal. It looks like a pancake with feet.
 
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