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Sapphire Canyon (WIP)

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Tyson TH

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Well, since I'm new to all this map editing.
I'd like to present one of the few levels I have planned for a level pack to be submitted in the submissions soon. The level I'm showing off is a race map that I can't seem to place a name for yet but I would like to show anyway. I'm still having some trouble though. But I'll stop talking and let you decide on what needs work.

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http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/341/srb20273.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/515/srb20272.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/688/srb20274.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/405/srb20275.png/

Links : http://www.sendspace.com/file/86y5vghttps://dl.dropbox.com/u/81656348/r_sapphirecanyon.wad
http://www.sendspace.com/file/y0orao

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Upload again on another link because 4shared only let us download the file if we register or log in.
 
Well, this is obviously a beginner's map. What more can I say really... well, maybe you shouldn't put the last and second-to-last starpost so close to each other. And you should also make it so that the last starpost activates when you jump on the land from the bridge, and not only when you run through it, like you did with the first post.

Also, the spikes do not pose any threat since most players will just run over them, and the right wall before said spikes can be run into in place as in, you don't stop running when you collide into the wall.
 
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