Mansion castle thingy

This is my first ever map made public :o . Yes its crap but its my first and i think i did pretty well. Well heres the download link......
Well please post your comments so i
can make this better.
http://www.sendspace.com/file/grs43g


Well well a island.


Wheres the evil pie?


Hot tub. What more must i say.


What happened here?


Brush up on your training

Please if you can fix it. Im still a noob at this.

i don't know how to fix a segment violation

Click to expand...

Press F4 in Doom Builder, foo.

thanks. i fixed it and now works good. check it out!

PLEASE use a different image hosting site. That one is as slow as a whale.

what site do you want me to use??