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Old 07-25-2009   #1
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Well, seeing as none of the other Kirby WADs are being converted to SRB2ME, I decided to make my own Kirby WAD for SRB2ME.



Critisism is welcome, but don't be an ass.
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Old 07-25-2009   #2
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Ok, I have a little bit of criticism here.
1. The shape of the eyes is wrong, they are
meant to be a bit taller and skinnier
2. The shading is a bit 2d, make it look more 3d
3. There is meant to be a white shine on the eyes
4. It is too big
Other than these, it's good.
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Old 07-25-2009   #3
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It's size is probably larger than it should be, but other than that, It's just little to sharp on some parts, but other than that, it's....pretty good. keep workin' on it!
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Old 07-25-2009   #4
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meh its alright
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Old 07-25-2009   #5
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Why does he have huge, bug eyes? And I think the shoes need a bit more shading, but it's good otherwise.
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Old 07-25-2009   #6
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Shading, Eyes, and little things have been improved.
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Old 07-25-2009   #7
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Shading is really minuscule, shade more than those little areas and make it more noticeable.
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Old 07-25-2009   #8
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Why does he have huge, bug eyes?
Have you seen the real Kirby? His eyes are huge too.
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Old 07-25-2009   #9
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For the eyes, use the darkest shades of gray you got. Darken the outline of the shoes a bit as well.
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Old 07-25-2009   #10
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Shoe tips need to be a bit more curved, and as the others have said, those small areas where shading is required need attention
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Old 07-25-2009   #11
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Shading, Eyes, and little things have been improved.
That is actually quite good for a second attempt.(Better than I could do.)
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Old 07-25-2009   #12
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The sprite is too big, but other then that it seems fine.
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Old 07-26-2009   #13
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The eyes need to be a slightly farther apart from each other, they're too close if you compare them to an official picture.

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Old 07-26-2009   #14
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lol pillow shading
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Old 07-27-2009   #15
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lol pillow shading
Doesn't seem that much like pillow shading, actually. :P

Seems PRETTY good, but I suggest making his smile a little smaller, put blue under his eye shine (like in the official pic- he has blue eyes), and I think it'd be better if he had dark pink feet instead of red.
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Old 07-27-2009   #16
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Don't make him smile in every sprite, he isn't like that. Just a tip.

Also, his ability? Make it double jump, but make it multiability. You could probably make him jump as high as knuckles to even it out or something.
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Old 07-28-2009   #17
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Don't be so reserved with the shading. Go get some tutorials or reference pics of spheres.
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Old 07-28-2009   #18
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I don't ask for anything but for my name to be mentioned on the release post, but I don't care if you decide not to. I just hope your wad is succesful. Happy wadding.
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Old 07-28-2009   #19
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1) The face appears off-center, and I can only assume this is the front frame.

2) Shading is way way way too minimal. It looks like a pancake with feet.
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Old 07-28-2009   #20
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Those honestly look a bit worse.
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