Sonic Maximum: a little demo

This isn't a game. This is a story. One that I made, or mading... This is uncomplete yet (well, for four weeks of working, five chapters aren't bad)... Nothing of other world...

Eggman, after fails in other of his plans, found a red girl hedgehog. Eggman uses she as his new weapon for Sonic, without known that she is the Devil!!!

Now, probably, you like more it by the starring than by the story... But you need to read it for know :D

A little demo of five chapters (more than enought for this time, no?):
http://www.rctd.ft6.com/uploads/SonicMaximumDemo.rtf

Get funny ;)

It didn't hold my interest very long. :?
Sorry.

i skimmed through it, and noticed a lot of people from here is there, but where the fuck am i??
edit:
forgot to write this :P, from what i read, its better than what i could think of...

I know that a lot of people of here is missing, but well, I can't remember everything at the same time :P

Hovewer, probably you don't know what will be the final fight (SuperDarkness vs. HyperSonic).