My very fist leval ship at sea
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If by picture, you mean avatar, you didn't make yours yourself...
Anyway, the map looks too bland, try adding some kind of structure in the middle, like a pirate flag, have a red spring to the top, and infinite ring be there. BTW, I actually haven't tried the map yet, I'm judging by the screenie.
EDIT: Boy, was I wrong. This map owns for a first one. Better Item placement, deafed rings, and you're good to go.
Anyway, the map looks too bland, try adding some kind of structure in the middle, like a pirate flag, have a red spring to the top, and infinite ring be there. BTW, I actually haven't tried the map yet, I'm judging by the screenie.
EDIT: Boy, was I wrong. This map owns for a first one. Better Item placement, deafed rings, and you're good to go.
Some other things:
1. Too many random monitors in one place. There should almost never be more than one in the same general location on the map.
2. Multiple weapon rings in the same general location. You should separate weapon rings by some distance, so it makes things difficult for players to control that ring weapon.
3. Level is too dark. I'm not sure why you set the lighting level so low.
It seems that you have the basics down either way. Far ahead of quite a few other first maps I've seen.
1. Too many random monitors in one place. There should almost never be more than one in the same general location on the map.
2. Multiple weapon rings in the same general location. You should separate weapon rings by some distance, so it makes things difficult for players to control that ring weapon.
3. Level is too dark. I'm not sure why you set the lighting level so low.
It seems that you have the basics down either way. Far ahead of quite a few other first maps I've seen.
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